the garden with roses

This is a really fun piece. I love black, white and red together. The varying line weights are nice and your lines are pretty smooth.

If you wanted to make this work stronger, my one complaint would be that my eye doesn't quite know where to land. I know you want the main focus of the piece to be the rose head - and its a really cool concept, by the way. I think adding more solid black framing the figure, or perhaps more small details within the surrounding shapes to darken this area, would help to make her pop out more.